Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Fiction Draft (Not Finished)

Titanic’s Alternate Ending

As the titanic hits the arctic iceberg a sudden chilling rattle of the ship alerts all. Immediately Captain Smith takes action and sends up flares attempting to gain attention for help. Rose passes by Thomas Andrews and assures him that everything will be alright although she knows there are not enough emergency boats on the ship to save everyone. Some will be left to freeze in the glacial water of the Atlantic. Meanwhile Jack was framed for stealing the diamond necklace Rose had previously wore during the portrait he drew. He was hand cuffed and left down hidden in the ship. Once Rose found where Jack had been put she could not find a key or break the handcuffs. Meanwhile, out in the distance lights from another ship began to appear. The Captain continued to shoot off emergency alert flares so that they could be rescued. Help came shortly, two large ships only big enough to squash all the passengers tightly packed in as if they were sardines. When the rescue men were making their final laps throughout the titanic looking for any lost victims they came across Jack and Rose waiting helplessly. The strong men released Jack within minutes and escorted them to the boats. Shortly as soon as the ships returned to land Jack and Rose ran off and eloped. They spent the rest of their lives in ageless never-ending love along with their five children Jake, John, Joe, Lilly and Daisy. As for Roses previous fiancé Cal, he was never brought back to land on the rescue boats and it has been a mystery ever since where his body may lay.

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